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Never too late

Never too late


It’s never too late
To bring back fate
Wipe off that plate
And stand up straight

Watching the rain
Her life’s down the drain
She’s under strain
Take away her pain

Be the love divine
Release the dove so fine
Strokes down the spine
Looking deep within the line

It’s never too late
To bring back fate
Wipe off that plate
And stand up straight

Hear the heart break
As the earth begins to quake
All sins placed at steak
Souls soon begin to shake

Fear of love soon depart
Heart beat fastens to a start
Soul song, dance of art
Watch her regain heart


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  • broken-colours
    October 12, 2007

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    Your wanting to rhyme is very honorable, but sometimes there is such thing as "too much of a good thing". That is, you can rhyme so much that, though it's executed fairly beautifully, it almost seems forced. But I do like your style of word choice. Very nice.