the bell rang
long
dragging
lingering in their minds
they escaped the prison cell
it was crowded
people shouting
loving
leaving
dying
noone cared
it was cold
clammy
chilled imprints in their brains
despair sunk in
she was lonely
cold
lingering
imprinted pain
it sunk in
death...
Author notes
First poem-very depressing but I just felt like I needed to get this out beofre I lighten up a little...
Comments
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*shudder* awesome. I loved the word imprinted.
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i think it says alot. not all poems are this good. you gotta write more.
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