there's this girl that i know
who'll steal away your heart
and add a little something
you've needed from the start
her eyes that seem to hold you
the warmest hugs around
once you're touched you'll never
want to leave the love you've found
she's so completely perfect
and i love her coz she's not
those perfect imperfections
that no-one else has got
there's this girl that you should meet
she means the world to me
and someday if you're lucky
you'll meet her and you'll see
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love you. thanks for being you.
and always being there when i've needed someone
you're one of the closest friends i've ever had
i know friends don't keep score...
but i'm in your debt
Please tell me what you think
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very sweet, very well written, lovely my friend simply lovely to say the least.as always amazing.
~beth -
Pretteh Poem. It's so sweet, and so totally true.
Congratulations on what is now one of my favourite poems of yours.
Yay.
But yessum. This is really sweet, and yes. Bek is awesome. All hail Bekkness.
I love the stanza about how completely perfect she is, cause it's so true.
I am sorta like Bek, I can't stop re-READing this. -evillaugh-
Pretteh.
I keep repeating myself. Ugh. But its probably cause I love this poem.
And Bek.
And You.
Drinks all around!
Muchly Love,
The Grave Monkey.
a.k.a. Phi
TEEHEE
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I can't stop reading it
I love it
love you
*glomps*
yes i dominate you.
I'ma the one on top now =D
beks.
me.
love. -
awwe
what a touching little piece.
it's short, sweet, to the point and it doesn't drone on and on and on about all the little details, it's simpler and therefore far nicer.
I like, I like
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We'll she is the most amazing girlfriend I've ever had for sure
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I completely agree with you.
Bek is completely awesome.
When I was going through a really tough patch I opened up to her and she really helps.
Love it.
Great work dude.
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i teared up!
me! miss heart of stone. haha lol
your great. she's fabulous
and i agree completely.
beckness is awesomeness
LMLT!!!
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aww ^_^
thats so nice =)
i agree with you completely about her
she's a little angel ^-^
great write
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awww this is a really nice poem see.j i liked it. i like the rhyming scheme and u dint lose meaning either with it. nice!
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awww this is one of the sweetest poems ever, seems you're both very lucky to have each other =)
wish i had a friend like this, someone who i could sincerely write this for or could sincerely write this for me...
very sweet write, great work! =D
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awwwwww
i love you!!!
this is completely awesomeness
you've helped me through so much
that i don't know where i would be
without your help or
without your support
I'm alwasy going to be here
and you'll never let me leave
and this is really freaky
because last night
I had this dream kinda thing
where all the people closest to me
were sick of me
and wanted me to leave
and i had no one.
and it felt so real =[
but now i read this
and it brings a tear to my eye
love you heaps
and miss you so much!
*hugs*
you're awesome
and never let ANYONE tell you otherwise
yeah i think i should stop typing now =p
Bekatory
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