can candlelight have a pulse?
Author notes
look at a flame on a candle...see how pure and innocent, beatifull it is
the line is asking whether something like that can exist in a living creature, or are we tainted?
it makes more sense if yew actually watch a flame for a few seconds and think about it...
A contest entry
- One Liners by Lj-.
300 points, ended October 23, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cool idea here.
Thank you for your entry,
Good luck.
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This is neat.If you think about it the way it moves it might.Thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes

