Crystal shards, refracted light
dancing across the heavens
in kaleidescope
of hushed tones.
Weaving through creation's tincture
soft glows harvest brilliance,
generating blush and bloom
to flaming comets...
passionate rainbow reigns.
Author notes
Prompt:
"It takes many colors to make a rainbow"(10 lines or less)
In a list
A contest entry
- Colors... by Peteskid.
700 points, ended October 13, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Color-filled poem that has wonderful music--good luck in the contest!
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Excellent
Another skillful creation of fantastic expression. Best of luck in the contest.
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this was such a beautiful write which holds so much within it
a beautiful take on the prompt
well done gran and best of lck
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rainbows are dancing around my heart here ,,wondrous..ps love the gorgeous new photo yum xxpp
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Very well written on the theme of colors in very expressive words, some wonderful imagery, word choices and descriptions. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest, and best of luck to you in the judging...PK
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beautiful
imagery and creativity..
indeed it does take many colors to make a rainbow
and you have illustrated that quite well..
Good luck in the contest, Brenda
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