At night I cry over spilt words and curdled love making.
Just so you know I faked the whole fucking thing.
You were none the wiser cuz you were too busy trying to have it off with your [oh-so-armorous] reflection.
I mean, honestly, are you kidding me?
He said, she said.
I say no. That's not the way it works.
If anything I wish for had a chance of coming true.
I wish that I had never loved the likes of you.
You want something from me and I know what it is.
You know I'm not going to give it up without a fight.
The words you said in the heat of the moment were all lost on me.
Cuz I never understood just why picnics by the sea and sharing bathtubs was so romantic.
And you with your lies...
I regret meeting you, but everything else just seemed to fall out of context.
Then suddenly everything was a big deal.
But, sweetie, it just never meant that much to me.
While you were planning romantic outings, I was planning an escape route.
And you were too busy with us to see what I wanted.
Bby, you and me never made an us, it just made a big, big mess.
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Something that just came to mind... whatever... EDIT*
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I like this...
it's emotional and 'sharp.' You definitely get your feelings across.
"He said, she said.
I say no. That's not the way it works."
Well penned &hearts
~HH
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"and you were too busy with us to see what i wanted...." i love that line---and everyone before it....this is an amazing poem--great job :]
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"He said, she said.
I say no. That's not the way it works.
You want something from me and I know what it is.
You know I'm not going to give it up without a fight.
The words you said in the heat of the moment were all lost on me.
Cuz I never understood just why picnics by the sea and sharing bathtubs was so romantic.
And you with your lies... "
mpmph!
i really like it (:
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