I kissed his flesh,
long sensual kisses...
his skin searing my lips.
He smelled like freedom
and a fall breeze,
with each breath
the closer I got to death.
He captivated me with his
eyes,
his looks and his presence.
His hands searched and caressed,
pulling at clothing.
Ripping, biting and sucking
grunting and screaming...
I didn't want it to end, but
at the same time...he was
sucking the life out of me.
I sucked, and touched, caressed
and gave myself to him
until it all came crashing down.
With a smile he pulled me onto his chest
- we laid on the soft pillows
of grass
in each others arms.
Author notes
ha ha that boy is cute!
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful Female Fantasies (WOMEN 18+) by delightfulmess.
875 points, ended October 21, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Upgrade your Honorable Mention to Gold Silver or Bronze (contest by sinnastarr) by Sinnastarr.
700 points, ended November 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hmmmm....interesting.
Comments
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STEAMING !!! What a great write. I have to wipe my glasses. Thay got all fogged up by the steming passion of the piece. great job and good luck in the contest.
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my first impression of the title exactly fits with the meaning of the whole write. Well my first impression was a very alluring guy...
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This was an enjoyable read. There is a lot of power behind this piece. I liked the lines
"He smelled like freedom
and a fall breeze,
with each breath
the closer I got to death."
Well done.
Good job on winning an honorable trophy.
Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck. -
You stated very simply and clearly this subject. I thought it was very nice indeed.
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Damn,you've totally nailed this!!!!!
The title is SO fitting for a piece like this;and the imagery and wording blew me away!
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aw this is so beautifully written. Such lovely words and it's such tasteful work! Unlike some people's >.< Good luck in the contest!
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lol WOW YOU CAN FEEL THE HEAT IN HERE!!!! glasses time!
lol loved it, you did an excellent take on the prompt, and wow, oh my best to you in the contest 
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it's awesomely amazing right! thank you!
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Oh what a wonderful piece
Damn you know a man like this is is a soul sucking
Adonis.
Wonderfully done thank you for entering my contest
delila
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