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Face

eyebrows lift

and

eyebrows fall

a latin brown

forehead round.

lips shall smile

and shall frown

an italian cheek

etched by

bones.

your feet so fast

a cyclop's way

clueless, I am

in your beauty's 

sway.

tender arms

of a blacksmith

gave

gold coins and

horsheshoes

luck possessed.

words drip 

through a finger's

pain,

a swine's corpulance,

bursting 

in vain.

Oh robed one! With

white beard, and

a wand to spare 

profess the story

Today! 

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  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    smiles and frowns, aye, they swirl us around poetry as the dance of beauty whisks us into the world, a good piece of poetry.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 12, 2007

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    This is a really good poem and one I throughly enjoyed reading! Well-written poem with vivid imagery and meaning galore!


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      October 13, 2007
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      I enjoyed this comment more than writing this poem. Thanks a lot. Love. Sam.


  • lovelifelive
    October 11, 2007
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    the many faces in one face i like it nice to see you back.