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I can't fly anymore

I'm a butterfly caught in a hailstorm.
My wings are left torn and tattered.
A reminder of how my heart feels.

I can't fly anymore.
You're anger has forced me to the ground.

I can't escape.
I can't fly.

So I weep.

My wings weep as well.
Red.
Crying for all the freedom they've lost.
Crying for all that has been left behind.

Because I can't fly away anymore.
You've caught me.
I'm all yours.

In anticipation of the pain.
I finish it.

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  • Blasphemous Girl
    October 24, 2007
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    Awww

    I relate to this. It reminds me of my friends, my family and my boyfriend. Love you x


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 15, 2007
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    I applaud you

  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 15, 2007

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    This reminds me of an old relationship I had, being held captive in a torrent of abuse but it is beautifully described once more x