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Looking Up

Jasmine and rose ring a bell
I may not not know you
But by heart I can tell

You have great friends
Like a fragrant mist in air
That is not seen
But no question is there

For whatever reason my darling
You need cheering up
May the Earth cup
your dearing touch

Ease it's misery and lift your soul
In a place of peices
When we need the whole

I send you love to fill the days
And cosmic things
Like golden morning sunrays

To lift your fragrant blooms to the sky
Reflect upon your face and skin
Drenched in dew filled sips
To water where was dry

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I had to enter cause I love to see others lifting up! May days bless you.

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  • Knight70 silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    uplifting indeed....

    I send you love to fill the days
    And cosmic things
    Like golden morning sunrays

    To lift your fragrant blooms to the sky
    Reflect upon your face and skin
    Drenched in dew filled sips
    To water where was dry


    I find this poem so very easy to appreciate. Whenever someone is feeling down, sometimes it just takes a few words to change their day. We truly benefit from being watered down with the right words to comfort us, especially when we're at our lowest. Don


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 11, 2007

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    What a truly beautiful piece of poetry!
    I know this will uplift her spirits immensely
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!