I'll write these words like they mean something.
But we all know they don't.
Nothing I can say will change you.
Or rid me of the memories.
Nothing I can break or tear will expel this anger.
Nothing I can scream will adequetly get the message to you.
Everything you put me through,
Almost cost me my life.
I ignored the fact that I needed help,
To submit my entirity to you.
Because you were the one who needed help.
You were the one
Who was breaking.
The reflections of you surround me.
But I'll close my eyes this time.
I've given up
Giving my life to you.
In a list
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OMG! This is amazing. The message of your writing is so clear and easy to relate to.
"Everything you put me through, almost cost me my life." I had an experience like that this summer. I was so frustrated with the way my life was turning out that I almost deliberately crashed my car. later I realized that it was not worth it, that I should not focus on trying to get his attention anymore. "I've given up giving my life to you."
Ironically, it was only after I had made that decision that he decided to pay attention to me. Now, we are in a beautiful relationship!
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this i beautifully written i loved evry word it was a pain to my heart as i feel the same but it evoked something in me it's beautiful
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Nothing I can say will change you.
Or rid me of the memories.
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Agreed. THis was well written I also liked its structure.great job here.
....Simply Me♥
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