In a sea of love I lie,
drifting on waves,
waves of ecstasy.
Tides of passion freely flow,
in and out again,
bringing with it new heights
heights of love.
The cries of passion,
turn to calls of a gull
soaring to new climaxes,
Flying high then low.
This sea of love goes on,
and on never ending,
never fading.
It calls to all that hear
to answer.
It is a sea of passion,
of love, a fulfilling sea.
A sea made for us,
Our sea of ecstasy.
Author notes
Written Jan. 1, 2000 for my hubby. For the contest Delightful Mood Swings Picture Prompt I chose pictures 6 & 7. This is the first time this poem has ever been published on AllPoetry.
A contest entry
- Delightful Mood Swings Picture Prompt Contest by delightfulmess.
2100 points, ended October 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Remind Me of the One I Love by Dlvvanzor.
1200 points, ended October 16, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TO BE LOVED by Whispering Wind.
900 points, ended January 21, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Help me find my muse!!!!! *pre-writes now allowed* by MyMudPies.
425 points, ended June 26, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very well written!!! i love it!!! i love romance... sensual stuf!! lol... it flows lovely!!
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LOVELY WRITE HERE
I SO ENJOYED YOUR POEM HERE AND YES LOVE THERE IS NOTHING QUITE LIKE IT . PS SORRY ABOUT THE CAPS ALL THE WORDS I TYPE ARE SO TINY I CANT SEE WHAT IM WRITTING UNLESS I USE CAPS I WILL FIND OUT HOW TO FIX IT SOON I HOPE
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Thank you. And don't worry about the caps I totally understand.
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Out standing and I love the pictures you have penned for the minds heart to see...Thank you so much sharing with me and for entering
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This is really soft and sweet.
"The cries of passion,
turn to calls of a gull
soaring to new climaxes,
Flying high then low."
Great imagery, nice flow.
Good luckinthe contest.
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Whistles~
WOW this was excellent. Great take on the pics.
Holy moly how am I ever going to judge this contest 
Thank you for entering
delila
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delightfulness
Thank you for the great comments it makes me feel good that I have thrown you for a loop with it. I am glad you liked it. 
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How passionate! This definately conveys a feeling. Thanks for entering!
Good luck!
-Dlvvanzor
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