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True Love

I love you more than the sky is  blue,
Deeper than the ocean is wide,
You gave me everything,
I love you,
You love me,
God is Love.

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Life is so good

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  • goalsv
    October 12, 2007
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    Great job in such a short verse. There is a lot of love fitted in.


  • PerVirtuous
    October 11, 2007
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    Short and powerful. I likey!


    • ebaby
      October 12, 2007
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      Im beaming that you likey my little poem, I had orginally wrote a poem for this called, No One Compairs To You, I worked on this hard ... and when I went to spell check it it got lost in the file not found..... I was flabergasted, I thought I could recreat it , but I knew it would not be word for word,, so I left it in Gods veiw only, the next day I wrote this for your contest........ Im pleased to have pleased you!