Birthday
Lots of presents
Cake time, ice cream and fun!
Do you wish you're the special one?
People support you no matter what age.
Turning different numbers is fun.
My birthday is special
I love my own
Birthday
Author notes
This was very fun to write. I love being able to choose different words to mach the syllables there needs to be.
1st line: 2 syllables (Same word/s as 9th line)
2nd line: 4 syllables
3rd line: 6 syllables
4th line: 8 syllables
5th line: 10 syllables
6th line: 8 syllables
7th line: 6 syllables
8th line: 4 syllables
9th line: 2 syllables (Same word/s as 1st line)
A contest entry
- Age 13 and Under ONLY ~ Celebrate Life, your friends, even yourself! by Amunet Wolfbane.
425 points, ended October 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Birthday Wishes by Michael-B.
550 points, ended March 5, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Agreed with Michael-B...very creative,
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Very nice poem just about covers everything that a birthday is about, and clever use of system with the syllables. Thanx for entering.
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You should love it! It's a great day indeed. excellent job here.
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With a poem like this one, you're bound to have a fun birthday
You did a super job with this and I've enjoyed reading it very much.
And I sure know how you feel about your own birthday... I had my 70th birthday on August 26th and it was such a good time. I look forward to an even more fun time next year.
You've done a very good job with this and I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Dee
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birthdays are always fun! (even if I'm getting old now... I love my birthday! lmao) keep up your amazing owrk. good luck in the contest!
Crimson
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