I'm writing to say,
I died yesterday
And nobody gave half a glance.
I cut and I bled,
For my heart was misled.
I don't want some false second chance.
And so as I died
I gave in and cried,
For breaking was too much to bear.
Death is a curse,
But heartbreak is worse,
But I know that noone will care.
Author notes
A piece of work done when I was particularly sad. One of my first pieces. Opinions please?
And I DO NOT encourage suicide. It i not good. Don't do it.
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Beautiful is the only word that comes to my mind..
This is beautiful..
I'm almost glad I didn't read it a couple of years ago though because I feel it would have made me do things I'd regret. Not because you encourage something but because I relate so much...
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AWW!!! don't worry! that is not true! i bet you there's at least one person on earth who cares and will feel a difference in his/her life when you're gone!
This was a very sad read!
Death is a curse,
But heartbreak is worse,
HOW true! very sad read... keep the faith!
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It's short, but powerful. The rhym(sp) you used helped it to flow. I feel like that alot, especially today. Nice write.
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this is very nicely written- well done. I like the unusual use of rhyme you have used.
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