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Blackened Ostrich Eggs (God, This Hurts)

Today I missed you
And you know why
Today I missed you
My heart does cry
Today I missed you
No words spoken
Today I missed you
From those unspoken
Today I missed you
I feel the hole
Today I missed you
You have lead role

In my heart
In my mind
Don't leave
Me behind

Today I missed you
You didn't come
Today I missed you
I know it's dumb
Today I missed you
I want your hugs
Today I missed you
My heart, it tugs
Today I missed you
I wanted to talk
Today I missed you
Because? You rock

In my heart
In my mind
Don't leave
Me behind

You didn't come
You die instead
You didn't come
Torments my head
You didn't come
Forsaken wishes
You didn't come

I miss you.

So much.

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  • unwantedemoheart
    June 10, 2008
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    this is beautiful
  • Gods Precious
    October 17, 2007
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    AWESOME STUFF

    This brought tears to my eyes, you spoke right into my soul


  • doyouloveit
    October 16, 2007

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    death is a painful thing indeed leaving us aching for that person to come around everyday when we know they won't and this touched me very much so for i just lost someone very close to me two weeks ago now and i wish i could call her every day thanks for writing this one


  • Zach.
    October 15, 2007

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    Poetry Critique for Teens

    A very interesting title that drew me into the poem; and the poem itself was excellent as well; I especially love your use of repetition

  • loser-face-liz
    October 14, 2007
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    umm this is by far one of my favorites out of this whole site!
    its really great!!


  • Sunnysideout12
    October 12, 2007
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    wow

    That is deep i like that!


  • backdrop.silhouette
    October 11, 2007
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    aww...

    cross ex sucked balls >.<

    you get three clappys.

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