When I look into your
Glowing eyes
All words taste hollow
Ashen
In my mouth
I wish to lay myself open
Show you my soul
For that is the only way
You'll know my love
This pulsing love
For you
I would give up words
My sight of you
And even my breath
To show you how I feel
Author notes
Option 4
A contest entry
- Random Options by Megan Awesome.
470 points, ended November 1, 2007, 23 entries
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Wow this is good. I think my favorite parts were ...
I would give up words
My sight of you
And even my breath
To show you how I feel
This is very sweet. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
Awesome.
I loved:
"I would give up words
My sight of you
And even my breath"
You sound like you know what it feels like to be in love. And you know that it's not all candy and roses. I wish other people would see this too.
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