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Shown the Ropes (a cub gets a lesson)

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Shown the Ropes

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Well, as always...... my poems are short....... but this one is also sweet!!! lol  A picture I took on my last trip to the mountains. Fun day!!!
Written October 7th, 2003

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  • November 2, 2003
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    Interesting. I think your idea of having a poem on an image is very creative. It's a wonder how you came up with the idea.

    x_Senor Diablo_
    Edited on Nov 03 because ''.


  • StarGazer
    October 29, 2003
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    cool, I liked it. The pictures adorable. Was that your car????? chee, crazy. Yes is short and sweet. Very good job. Thanks so much for your comment on A Gentle Raging Breeze Monk. keep it up. ciao
    *~StAr~*

  • gbird
    October 11, 2003
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    im with melly.if that was ur car i feel bad!lol
    love
    gabs

  • Whisper
    October 9, 2003
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    Uniquely satisfying short verse. Fabulous pic.

  • curlyqmel
    October 8, 2003
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    HAHAHAHAHAHA! that was cute. Was that your car, if so poor you, if not poor person who happened to find a few bears having fun going through there trunk...lol.
    Loves and Hugs,
    Melly


  • jenneddin silver member
    October 8, 2003
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    LOL, I miss seeing the bears.... this was so cute


  • MoonlitStarz
    October 8, 2003
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    Greetings,
    ******************************************************************
    This was such a great write. There is nothing wrong with a short poem. Sometimes short is better because it gets right to the point. Very cute, good write.

    ~Lise


  • Bigmammajen
    October 8, 2003
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    ahhhhhhhhhhh this is cute

    though I would suggest chocolate Ham is good and all, but chocolate is da bomb


  • Ava Noire silver member
    October 7, 2003
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    HA HA! Cute ku monkman.


  • haikumonk gold member
    October 7, 2003
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    Thanks Mary Anne..........


  • October 7, 2003
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    This may be short, but truly wonderful as it is!! I really enjoy this and I thank you so much for entering the contest. Best of luck.

    ~~Mary Anne~~


  • haikumonk gold member
    October 7, 2003
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    Thanks Nan........... I loved the moment. They played in that car for twenty minutes. Once in awhile, Mom would blast the little one....... guess she needed most of the goodies for her hybernation.......... more than the cub!!!!! lol


  • naninina
    October 7, 2003
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    Sweet, indeed!

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