For better is when you hold me close in the winters cold
For worse is a summer vacation gone wrong and we fight
the whole read trip long.
For better is laughing and playing as if we are still kids,
For worse is when we disagree to agree, angry emotions fly, leaving us both distraut about to cry
For better is our isolated moments with pizza and a great movie, with you cuddled up next to me.
For worse is when the moment is frail and it seems our
relationship is going to deteriorate,
For better is when we remember our great moments and
realize we have a lot to appreciate.
For worse is the negative opinions of other people saying
"you two won't last look at your past."
For better is working as a team not knowing what to do, but somehow our fighting hearsts always make it through.
For worse is the long periods of seperationd
feeling for eachother the greatest desperation.
For better is enjoying your partner during the best moments in life as you create them or as the come.
For worse is getting through lifes obsticles even when you feel there is nothing the two of you can do
Though you"ll find the love that stands through it all
Is the kind of Love that is TRUE.....
Author notes
I see this somewhat, how vows should be when you find that Special person... whenever I find mine???? LOL
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very sweet poem
I love your idea of expanding on for better/for worse. . .what a great idea
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amazing!I love the concept and the structure and the original manner in which you handled simple yet powerful word-combinations!it has that something need it to toatlly capture the reader!well done indeed!
keep up!
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You're so romantic at heart! And your words are very true! Take it from me! I've said those vows & it has a very very profound meaning once you've said them to one another.. More so then I've ever imagined! I want you to be happy, girl!
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