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Sweet dreams

Through pleated nights and aesthetic dreams
She beckons unto my heart
Come now my love…
Fall ever deeper into azure skies and carmine sunrise

Within slumbers soft embrace
Wrapped in silken comfort
My body of its own accord
Yearns for her touch

Whilst my mind with golden threads of hope
Weaves a dream
Makes a wish
Makes a pledge to love her always

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  • Breaking Inside
    November 7, 2007
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    i love your poetry... add me as a fav and we can share our poetry!!!


  • Breaking Inside
    November 5, 2007
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    wow that was great!!! good luck in my contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    WOW GO GIRL!

    Great read! I love the imagery you have portrayed here, nothing short of excellence! Best of luck in your contest!


  • weebabycole
    October 12, 2007
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    can feel how much you want this girl

    really good use of words xx