Through pleated nights and aesthetic dreams
She beckons unto my heart
Come now my love…
Fall ever deeper into azure skies and carmine sunrise
Within slumbers soft embrace
Wrapped in silken comfort
My body of its own accord
Yearns for her touch
Whilst my mind with golden threads of hope
Weaves a dream
Makes a wish
Makes a pledge to love her always
A contest entry
- I WANT LOVE!!!!!! by Breaking Inside.
450 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow that was great!!! good luck in my contest!
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WOW GO GIRL!
Great read! I love the imagery you have portrayed here, nothing short of excellence! Best of luck in your contest!

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can feel how much you want this girl
really good use of words xx



