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removing the hate

used to always get angry
wanted things to be clear-cut
everything in place
and no confusion

but life is just like that
nothing ever always goes one's way
and now I am learning
to get on
and life would be much easier
and better

for a start,
accepting becomes
more than just
a nod and a sulk
it is being happy,
putting a smile
even when things
go out of place

and not everyone
can always stay the same
moods change for them too
just like mine
but I have to learn
to put up with it
everyone has their bad times

and I should stop comaparing
no one will ever be the same
so how can things
be done to everyone
just because they are friends?

the smile on a friend's face
upon hearing your joke
or just wanting to take
a picture with you
makes it all worthwhile
in the end

so I just have to learn
to put a smile on my face
laugh at jokes told
and just go along
even when no one
seems to have heard you
or wants to hear you

this is what I have learnt
and I thank you
for making me reduce
the hate in me
which had embedded itself

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  • lindaburns gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    I see you are sixteen. Thank you for entering my contest. Write on!


  • dreamfinder
    October 18, 2007
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    Very nicley done, you say what so many should. Good luck


  • checkmate
    October 12, 2007

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    beautiful

    This was a beautiful write, full of acceptance and love for yourself. Your words were amazing, and your acceptance for your flaws makes it even more amazing dear aparna. I am so proud of you

    Take care