Fear
is hope
that has disappeared
into the surrounding darkness
It is
feeling alone
only you are there to save yourself
and you question
your own ability
to do so
Fear is
of downfall
of death
fear of not surviving
and never coming home
A contest entry
- SHOW ME FEAR by Sinnastarr.
450 points, ended October 14, 2007, 39 entries
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Comments
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I really liked this piece. Short and powerfull. You described fear to me very well. I liked the stanza
"It is
feeling alone
only you are there to save yourself
and you question
your own ability
to do so"
THank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
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