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... the ocean's lover ...



your ebb and flow fills me - with fluid heat within,
reaching my very depths, striping my resistance
with each crashing wave upon the sand.










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short and sweet

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  • freespirit51 gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    Sweet poem my fellow poet. I enjoyed this little piece for sure. Very descriptive with so few words. Your words flow well, making this a very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    with each crashing wave upon the sand.

    ya..short and sweet..well done..thanks for the entry in my contest...