My passion for you is real
My love for you can't be sealed
I loved you once
I loved you twice
It's not my fault that you're so nice
It's with you that I belong
No matter if your anger for me is strong
I told my friends how I feel
She told me my love was real
You may not feel the same about me
But I know deep down in your heart
You want to admit your feelings to me
It can be love
It can be hatred
But I know that it will set you free
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice write. Maybe one day they will come to their senses.
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This is a powerful piece.
Thanks for sharing kind of sad..you penned with great emotion.
Best wishes
Tory
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I liked but it was depressing
Well this was for someone that i liked so much but i thought he felt the same about me.
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