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Haiku 50

We hold our hearts to
the sky for hope to see the
huge great white full moon.

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  • horsecowgirl
    October 11, 2007

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    this is a slight bit confusing to me. i dont really see the main subject but that is what makes it so unique. this poem makes me feel very mysterious. i cant wait for your contest! good piece! keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~horsecowgirl~