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The Last Star

She wept a weary tune for life
The times she fought and cried
For something out of reach inside
She wept for all she'd tried
Not one person upon the Earth
Had learned a lesson true
That the only way you can find love
Is to look within you
And the night sky turned
In the Earths atmosphere
And the memories died with the dawn
All the beauty and sorrow
Life left in its wake
Was left and lonely and gone

Life that was lost, I'm sorry for you
I knew that you had died
My sorrow was given to the light
He knew how deep I cried
Not one human being had learned
That truth is the meaning of all
They tortured her soul till the end
She heard that last lonely call
And the evening became
Part of everything then
And the memories faded with sun
All the pain that she suffered
Was gone in the light
And a new day had begun...

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 17, 2007

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    Wonderful Again

    Wonderful again. Your writing is very very deep Goldie. I agree, it is full of despair too. But, the ending brings renewed hope. Well done.

    Wayne
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  • oleander
    October 11, 2007
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    beautiful, moving, full of despair