And her delicate feet
Fit in well, as if made just for them..
On charming sandals, they took their seat.
In awe watched the crowd
Jealous eyes stealing glimpse
Of graceful toes standing proud.
There he stood, her man of dreams
Prince Charming alighted straight
From a chariot decked with gleams..
With all his love, he has come, he said
To confer the queen, who owned thy feet,
Carry her away and happily wed..
Her cheeks turned pink
As she trembled with joy,
And felt her heart slowly sink..
A treasured moment, captured to behold
With cheer, romance and the merging of dreams,
The timeless classic told and retold..
A contest entry
- 15 hour Quickiness 15/15/15 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 11, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW...your poem was very lovely...captured the classical moment of lovers that are so much in love...such an intimate poem...
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I am just looking this glittering sandals and then your poem - it perfect fits together - timeless classic both of them. Congratulations for this nice shiny trophy!
~Sonja~
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I bet that they are your feet, top marks for the poem, and the feet as well,
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Luckily.. I'm spared of the step sisters and step mother.. Happier.. as I am than in Cindrella's sandals.. thanks for your comment..
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Beautiful!
A classic in itself !
This is lovely!
Lynda
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