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punk i'm am

I'm nothing but a punk,
drifting away,
obediently following
the current of the river.

I have no dreams,
no hopes.
My future was set.
Just floats on the icy cold water,
and let the currents lead.
Who knows..
what lies ahead could be good.

Author notes

i hope you like it...though it's not about music/stereotype things...not really good at english,so,sorry about the errors...

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  • GossamerAlice
    October 12, 2007

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    Ah, well I wasn't asking for anything in particular and punk isn't necisarrily about music so yeah. I really like how you included lack of everything but still a presence of life.
    Nice.
    Thanks for entering.