Circles of concavity
Liquefied permanence
Flowing from her spine
Spent frivolity emboldened
Flurries of ecstasy
Continuing after
Resting beside her
Author notes
prompt: In this cup
It took me here. I swear.
A contest entry
- quickie ~ 10 ~ 15 ~ 20 ~ GO! by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Where did you come up with "Circles of concavity"?? This was an interesting take on the prompt, and you did a great job!
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this was a beautiful take on the priompt using strong flowing words which where powerful
well done bro and best of luck
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Eww...concavity...I really dislike that word because of its relation to calculus...which is evil...
But such impressive vocabulary that this isn't something I could read through quickly and comprehend. It makes each word seem very important in and of itself. An interesting take on the prompt. I think I see how it's connecting (especially with the first line) but I'll be honest, I'm not sure I truly get it all. It did create some interesting images though. Great write and good luck in the contest. -
Wow.
Such a very unique take on the prompt! Absolutely stunning!!! The language, the thought - potency of a single passionate thought, unfurled. Nice penning!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Nice take on the prompt, original and stated eloquently, nice!
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Very creative indeed and excellent take on the prompt. Quite expressive language. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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