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Commonality



Dense delete
diffuses records,
rubs clear
the traces of truth
in bleak remember
until forgotten
limbo dissolves within new fill.

Particles dispersed,
whisper
in ghosted fashion
linking recognized projections
to title "Déjà vu."

A paramnesia of experience
passed to commonality.





Copyright © 2007
Pamela A. Lamppa
(All Rights Reserved)

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Image Credit: http://www.valiant.tamilla.com/images/fractured_goddess.jpg

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  • Heart Sutra
    October 26, 2007

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    I appreciate the abstract elements in this poem, as if it goes perfectly with the image and the emotion.


  • Watuwant silver member
    October 12, 2007

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    This is kind of a wispy little piece, Pamela, and I love line seven. Reading this made me feel, well, wispy! lol
    Nicely done.
    peace
    doug


    • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
      October 12, 2007
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      doug

      Thank you my friend. I am pleased for your wispy words. Be well. ~Pamela


  • aliceramone
    October 10, 2007

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    I really love that image and your poem was even better...dig that deja-vu... a great place to take the image-kicking!

    • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
      October 10, 2007
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      aliceramone

      Thank you so much. I am always pleased to receive your comments on my verse. So glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks again. ~Pamela

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