reflections broken
by speared olive
looking like an eyeball;
I see me,
and it
stares back accusations.
I hate olives.
Author notes
I really do hate olives.
A contest entry
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390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
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A most clever write...hahaha...good luck in the contest
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lol
nicely done.
Though I disagree about olives. hehe -
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Thanks.
I feel this story is pressing though, because it seems you like olives. I defend my dislike of them. I once ordered a wrap filled with vegetables at a restaurant, and no where in the description were olives mentioned. Well, I get it and there are kalamada(sp?) olive in it. But these olive still had the pits in them! So, not only did they taste bad, but I nearly broke all my teeth on the huge things. Olives have done no good for me.
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LOL
Thanks
Well that explains it then.
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Classic! Powerful expressions within simple dialogue. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Lol, this is perfect, I love it!
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Prompt is ~ In this cup
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