No longer
does it feel safe
to cup my hands
drinking deep
from once pure waterways
of our Mother Earth.
Author notes
20 word quickie: in this cup
A contest entry
- quickie ~ 10 ~ 15 ~ 20 ~ GO! by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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In this cup is size 36b...oops. ha ha.I wish I had the time to of entered this one. I love poems about cups. lol. Your mark on this is great, very pure and well done. or was that a 44 dcup.?
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Excellent take on the prompt here! So beautifully penned! And thanks for the heads up!
Best wishes in the contest!
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Oh deeply meaningful. Nice work!
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Truly a meaningful piece laced with the reality of societies mistakes. thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Thank you and thanks for hosting
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Prompt is ~ In this cup
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