You poured
love's elixir
into my heart's
tarnished chalice.
Together we drank
of fermented passions,
intoxicated
by affection's wine.
Author notes
Prompt - In this cup
A contest entry
- quickie ~ 10 ~ 15 ~ 20 ~ GO! by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you thin
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I love this too, but then you know me I adore all things you write..(lol) Gracefully written for a romantic viewer to read..
God bless, Brenda
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Such brilliance is so few words... Excellent take on the prompt here! LOVE it! Best wishes in the contest!
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A wonderful take on the prompt.
I like "fermented passions"
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So lovely and laced with the essence of romance. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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