Falling on my knees in worship
Giving all I am to seek Your face
Lord, all I am is Yours
My whole life I place in Your hands
God of mercy humbled I bown down
In Your presence, at your throne
I called, You answered
And you came to my rescue and I,
I want to be where You are.
My whole life I place in Your hands
God of mercy humbled I bow down
In your presence, at Your throne
I called, You answered
And you came to my rescue and I,
I want to be where You are
In my life, be lifted high
In my world, be lifted high
In my love, be lifted high
I called, You answered
And you came to my rescue and I,
I want to be where You are.
A contest entry
- Christian Poems!!! by vdpuppylvr.
300 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think.
Comments
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I like it
Yes you were feeling religiously poetic today. I love this poem its realli good. I had a perfect picture of you in it. Praying as hard as you can. I love how u capitalized every You showing that God has respect, and the lines are great. I love how it was sad, and then happy, I realli liked how you used lifted in the second to last stanza. I think you need to make some more lines though, it doesnt seem parrallel, but the rest is nice. You could include why you wanted help, that would have a lot more ease on the reader. All together its a great poem, keep it up!
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Well you did say you were feeling religiously poetic. I wish I could get mood swings like that! I like this one. My favorite part was the stanza "In my life, be lifted high. In my world, be lifted high. In my love, be lifted high." It reminds me of the church hymns, but much less boring. Inspiration is the key to great poetry. You really have a good influence to keep you going.
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