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Home is...

Missing image
Canola breath
littering the air
with an essence
                      of somewhere long past.

Miners fade
underground passages
leading back to now.

This is where I sleep
restful silence
like tumble weeds in May.

Crayoned green
with specks of lemon
summertime song and barley smiles.

This chair
rocks me into tomorrow
peaceful dreaming
                        in country lace.

Far away
outback hues
orchestrating the wind

that keeps me still...

Author notes

picture taken of my home town

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    So melancholy in its simple beauty. Thank you for entering.


  • alexandrathegreat
    October 10, 2007
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    This is beautiful I really loved it. Nice work. The flow is impecable.