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As I Watch You Sleep This Night

As I watch you sleep this night
Outside the world leaves out of sight
And I paint these words for you
Because my love for you is true

Eternally yours are my words so pure
Forevermore you are my cure
The leads me out of temptation
And keeps me from my last redemption

My heart was cold
These words for you
Unveiling beauty
That was given to you

I love you with my heart, mind and soul
And to you I give my everything
Bring me the signs that you will love me too
And those distant choirs will always sing

Author notes

This poem was written for the girl that I am currently in love with. I had to write it so that she knew how much she meant to me.

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  • Androgyneric
    October 16, 2007
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    This is so flowing, elegant, and full of romantic energy. I love this.