Misty midnight moon
dancing on waters
Slowly creeping your
way across the skies
With the orchestra
softly playing
in the breeze
Floating through clouds
(meet me there)
Wrapped in wings
-soft and delicate-
Two hearts-
beating as one
dance across the sky
lost in each other
While energy
surrounds
hold sacred
-our love-
grains of sand
falling
(through black hole
one at a time)
-lighting our way-
keeping time to the orchestra
Two hearts
-beating as one-
A contest entry
- From the Heart (Contest 2,000 points!) by PerVirtuous.
1700 points, ended October 25, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Im Melting..
No..Im not teh Wicked Witch of the west...but one cant help but do just that as you read this. Nicely done and good luck,
Evan -
awwww love the way this feels. nice job. success in the contest.
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Excellent
Oh my this is so touching. And so full of passion. Best of luck in the contest.
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Melodious!!
Beautifully penned which tugs at the heartstrings~
Love the images You convey and the yearning~
The hearts beating as one
Love this!!
Thank You for sharing this from Your Heart!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful! You know already that I love, love poems ant this one melts my heart. You have infused such a deep emotion into the perfect image of being carried away into bliss and melting into another person. Beautiful!
Love,
Amera♥
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beyond beautiful
every word is so soft and sweet.
loving and warming to the heart.
this piece just flows so softly across the page like magic.
you have such a way of making your readers feel, your words.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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i think that this is beautiful. the style is a little unorthodox-but isn't that love? very good job.
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like a dream he appears
the water, the moon, the rhythm of all sounds
seem to mimic loves echojust lovely
love ya!
Michelle
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makes for a great image in the readers mind. starts and ends very lovely. you explain the unity well. (given thats the point of the poem but still,very nice)
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For some odd reason, I got the picture of a sunset on a beach with doves flying into the sky...is that what you were going for? lol. You have a good shot at the contest, Mom, and I wish you the best of luck
Love, Little One
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