Once I was a blue girl
In a world of shaded grey
Happy with myself, alone
But a blue girl anyway
You've always been a friend of mine
For many a troubled day
Fin'lly looked within to find
A new and different way
And I heard what you said to me
I listened with my heart
You said things so sweet to hear
They tore my will apart
And I saw what you meant to me
What I'd never seen before
And now that you're the one for me
I'm not lonely anymore
Now the world is brilliant
Every colour, every shade
Glistens to the wakened eye
By the love that we have made
And every time I look at you
I see my old best friend
With a whole new light around your face
As our love now takes a stand
And I heard what you said to me
I listened with my heart
You said things so sweet to hear
They tore my will apart
And I saw what you meant to me
What I'd never seen before
And now that you're the one for me
I'm not lonely anymore
Once I was a blue girl
In a grey and shaded world
But now that you're the one for me
I'm not lonely anymore
Author notes
Yet another song. I know the voice and lack of background music is a little rough, but it's just to help you get an idea of the melody. Blessed be!
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I like it and good use of emotions.
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omg!!!!!!!!! lovez it!!! im serious....
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This was outstandley beautiful my dear! Your voice is very lovely!
The poem is so sweet !
Your mastered this!
~lisa~
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just a work of art!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved all the song, the lyrics the images used,all combined just beautiful!!!
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I wanted to stop by and see
what this video poetry was all about and Id have to say I am very impressed and very interested as well.
This is beautiful forget the background issues you were concerned about, I think you did a great job in creating your video image and poem to go with.
Well done
ephiphany
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Thanks eversomuch Bella! Glad you liked it. I'm working on uploading the song, but I have to warn you, I'm no candidate for American Idol.
And there's no background music yet because I'm not that talented. But it's sung nonetheless! Lol. Thanks again for reading and commenting. Blessings!
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I will love to hear them! This is just so lovely! Can just imagine it set to a melody!!!
Blessed Be Sister!
Az
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Thanks sweet sister! Very glad you liked it. I'm getting ready to upload the video, but my voice is not an all-star voice and there's no music. But it at least shows the melody. Blessed be, dear one!
~Soka
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