after some time
the petals fall
the stems will crack
at Nature's call
but one will stand on it's own
Strong and Proud
to be alone
solitary in its state
represents life
and also fate
the flower of eternity
represents what you mean to me
when it dies
my love does too
which is why I can say
I will Forever love you
Author notes
I love you
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Comments
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sweet. i like the imagery used, and the metaphorical view on love... or is it analysis based on nature. lol
thank you for entering :-P
i don't like the "<3" at the end of the poem though. it's not exactly.... for a poem. It's more for AIM, MSN or blogs....
also, i think you can find a better way to say
"the flower of eternity
represents what you mean to me" it sounds too much of a "HERE-IN-YOUR-FACE" kinda of thing. get me? sorry. i have a hard time explaining myslef :-P
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I think this was wondrfully written>
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