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ink of dark sublime

Skill of quill to design,
semblances of art for the mind.
Traipsing souls across the white,
in stained ink of dark sublime.

Concoction of verse complete,
metrical wording tempts to please.
Freedom soaring blindly whole,
prompting images on nerves delight.

Fragrance the essence intuited,
belief in pastoral goodness blessed.
Scenic wonder challenges stress,
within creators heart and breast.

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  • Cherokee
    November 16, 2007
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    Not my cup of tea but thank you for sharing anyway.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    It is not wasted dear friend. This is really beautiful. The host lost out, their loss. Your talent and intelligence shines brilliantly in this poem. Awesome writing.

    Jeannie


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    Very nice. Great word choice and flow, creative and very unquie. A very well written piece full of imagery.
    Thank you for sharing.
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