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Seasons

Icy chill
frozen breath,
warm fires,
curled up with your love on the sofa
Winter

Trees
Shed their leaves
Cool
Crisp
The death of nature
Autumn


Green buds
Spring thaw
Birds chirp cheerfully
Natures new life begins
Young with life to live
Spring


The sun shines bright
long days
warm nights
windows open
feel the breeze
do whatever it is you please
Summer

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    October 13, 2007
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    beautiful


  • Darkslight
    October 11, 2007

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    Oo, first one sounds good to me. Winter is my favourite. I liked the whole thing, nicely written


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 10, 2007

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    My dear sweet daughter, this has a touch of Robert Frost, to me...his poems have alot of tuning to the seasons...I love it. YOu keep up the awesome writing. YOu make me so proud of you, Brittany!!! ~jeremiC.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    This is a very nice take on the prompt thank you for your entry goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes


  • crimsondew
    October 10, 2007
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    Very pretty written..Loved the warm feel of all the seasons here..All the best!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 10, 2007
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    Yuor prompt: The seasons of change

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