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What Would Happen?

What would happen
If I went against time
Would I shatter the distance
Or break my own rhyme

Would I take 3 steps
But lose many more
Would I see myself reflected
On a black wooden door

What would happen
If I chose my own fate
Would I lose all I know
And feel only hate

Would I never smile again
Or see a single star
Would I walk many miles
But never go far

What would happen
If I could live forever
Would I be any braver
Or be any clever

Would I still be smart
And still be kind
Would I always stay sane
Or lose my mind

What would happen
If I refused to die
Would I feel any pain
Or want to cry

Would I choose to die
And see what death holds
Or choose to live
And live a life cold

What would happen
If I went against time
Whose life would end first
Yours or mine
~Kay~

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  • new born
    November 4, 2008
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    This is a wonderful poem & I love your topic, but I am not sure how it fits my contest.


  • anaisnais
    November 12, 2007
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    Nicely done in word and rhythm, well done.x