Sometimes I just want to end it all
Slit my wrist and let my eyelids fall
Never opening again
I feel the pain and start to grin
The sharp shiny blade slides up my wrist
Dark red blood I wont be missed
Author notes
Really short...buuut gets my point across haha
Please tell me what you think
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aw its really cute but once again totally sad
i would miss you if you died!
so don't kill yourself!
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this is really good...straight forward i luv it...
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i lovvveed this
it reminds me of my emo days
or whatever...
i love your writing
it makes me smile
even if its all dark and what not
D:
:]<3
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This is straight to the point. It something about your writes that keeps me reading them. I guess because they are so"toxic". keep it up.
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Thanks!
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weel normally i don't like work like this, but there was a ring and simplicity to this one that really makes it different. the title however makes it sound like a love/loss of love poem. I like the length as well, normally i come across a cutting poem about a page long. this was good it didn't get gory and still had lyricm in it.Good work!
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Well it kinda is a love loss poem...
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