Exhibitions of distinct patterning
reflective of an encompassing aura
completely challenging it's subject
to be better, be best, to extend
not taking 'no' for an answer
relaxing only in your best good
needing you to feel it's simplicity
wrapped in complexity's domain
all you are lacking it fuses
as per the master/blueprint plan
Love dominates in dimensions
releasing-relaxing it's pull
holding one tightly, but gently
all it desires is your good
that you be all you can be, understood?
It speaks to your direct potential
because it knows best for you
never to berate or seek contention
implication for excellence it engenders
out of it's own self love it renders
A contest entry
- Love's true Meaning by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
360 points, ended October 31, 2007, 13 entries
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Thank you for a very inspiring and thoughtful entry. These are the best lines for me:
Love dominates in dimensions
releasing-relaxing it's pull
holding one tightly, but gently
all it desires is your good
that you be all you can be, understood?
It speaks to your direct potential
because it knows best for you
never to berate or seek contention
implication for excellence it engenders
out of it's own self love it renders
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