The child forgotten will never survive.
A contest entry
- One Liners by Lj-.
300 points, ended October 23, 2007, 24 entries
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Powerful Truth!
That's right! The child forgotten WILL NEVER survive!
Unfortunately, not many people in this world really care if they live or die today.
How many people will think about the starving children today or the children living in violence and drugs. How many people will try to do something in this life to save them.
Not many. So most die while only a few are saved.
A powerful truth spoken in few words. Nothing more needs to be said.
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Too simply said.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck.
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short and to the point... love it
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That is so true and also very sad. And yet still thought provoking...
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Wow, I can honestly say that is the shortest poem I've ever seen. Still you have a good point and its sad. Great one liner, good luck in the contest.
jan
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