-i wish i could soar around like a bird
-i wish i was a celebrity and got my picture taken on a magazine
-i wish everything was free so my parents wouldnt be unhappy about thier unpayed bills
-i wish i could give poor people some money to be healthy and live good
-i wish my dad was always happy
-i wish my brother wouldnt annoy me as much
I WISH
WISH
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WISH
I WISH
Please tell me what you think
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Good wishes come from a good heart. Wishing is a powerful thing our minds can do. Never stop doing that - it is the way in which we speak to great popers. Thank you for creating and sharing this wish as tall as a tree. Take care,
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what a way with words you have! wonderful job you did here. very heartfelt. keep writing! God bless you always
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This is beautiful, so touching and heartfelt. I can't believe you're only 10. Very well written and i love the way you have set it out too. Well done.
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I absolutely love the way you got creative with the ending. It really draws the reader into your words. I must say this is a powerful poem, and I think anyone who stumbles across with agree with the things that you are wishing for. Nicely expressed dear poet!
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forgot to applaud!
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O.o!!!
This is awesome!
You're very mature for a 10 year old, and your writing shows it! I love this!
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