War...
Flesh and blood scattered the streets
Blood curdling howls
Ear piercing screams
Lycan and vampire locked in combat
Beside him, stands Mina... that whore
Her eyes filled with aversion
Ready to destroy me at the chance
I laugh,
"Only in your dreams my love"
Mesmerized by her vicious moves,
Her beauty, her skill..
Taking me off guard.
I'm on the ground
Bones shattered, ambrosial blood flowing from my wound
But never will I cry out in pain
Never showing signs of feebleness.
Pulling myself up,
Full of rage
I attack her heart...the lycan
Taking him down
For that is what I do best
Moving in for the kill
Fate intervenes
All living things surrounding us freezes
As my love interferes
Karma at work, destroying my arrogance
And now she lays with her head in my arms
Breathing her last breath
My love forever gone
I, no longer a God
My caderverous heart shattered before my eyes.
Immortality, a curse...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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fantastic story, all three parts, well written and captivating. awesome!
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well i enjoyed it although it was a big twist... i still enjoyed the fact that you put alot into it.. my fav line is the last one.. immortality, a curse...!!! that is the topper right there!!!
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Brilliant twist at the end! Love it love it love it. A great easy read that flows well and sucks you into the story and leaves you wanting more! Great job!
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Sweet
Awesome, Kathy you really hae something going here!!! My favorite lines were "I, no longer a God
My caderverous heart shattered before my eyes.
Immortality, a curse..." Because they sounded so ominous...resonated within my soul.... Anyways keep it up...and lol try to pay attension in class
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