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Memoirs of a Vampire (Part II)

Chasing, flitting, always quiet
Watching her
Her scent; how extravagant and delicious
Her beautiful face, fierce but loving
Always watching
For she shall be mine..for all eternity
Five centuries and no woman have refused me
Nor shall she
Despite the vampire huntress in her
She will succumb beneath me ...
How wrong I was...
Her heart; captivated by a filthy creature ever existed
..The lycan
A promise I vow not to break,
He shall suffer, send him into demise
No creature will stand between me and what I want
For they shall be crushed by my hands
Her scent; no longer delicious but revolting
I will forever change that my Mina.
I will draw blood from that beautiful neck of yours,
Together we shall be,
Make love to you under the bloodletting moonlight,
Fulfill your deepest darkest wishes,
"Take my hand my love
I will take you beyond this world",
For I am your vampire God.

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  • pain is strength
    November 13, 2007

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    this is kinda following 2 things... the movie underworld.. the second and also a book that i have read called the twilight.. it is a wonderful comparison so dont think that was an insault..!!!


  • OnyxtheForsaken
    October 11, 2007
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    Excellent second-parter. On to the third now! I can't wait!