His love for his country and desire to serve his nation
Must always be a cause of great congratulation;
Every day for the USA and for God he risks his life,
Even though his absence from home hurts his lonely wife!
His friends and family think of him with great fears,
And his dear wife has to fight back sad wifely tears,
But she knows he is a dedicated soldier bold and brave
Who would give his life his dear comrades to save!
So every single day you are far away from our view,
We shall think of you and pray so hard for you;
We shall worship Jesus and proudly sing along,
And keep on praising God with a righteous song!
Author notes
I guess it's option 3!!!!!!!!!
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A contest entry
- AMERICA LAND OF THE FREE AND HOME OF THE BRAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Talking Toni.
600 points, ended July 31, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only Prewrites by Samplette.
1000 points, ended September 20, 2008, 41 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Heartfelt and inspirational! Encouraging all of us to pray for our troops! Nice job!
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Through it all we need to continuely praise and trust in the Lord. This is a two-fold piece...tells of having faith and praying for the soldier. Very nice. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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There is NO justice if you do not win GOLD with this gem of a poem. May the Lord bless you for your love of the USA, the home of all good Jesus-loving people!
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Great job
good job and i wish you the best in this contest, really deserving poem, give it a GT Judge, lol
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I Love This!!!!!!!!!!!
It is almost lyrical sounding to me....You tell of the love a soldier has for his/her country along with the sacrifice they give as we si back and enjoy rarely taking a moment to refect on all they really do for us...Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in my contest~~~Toni~~
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This is great.
Thank you for such a lovely tribut to the soldier, you have probably helped someone's loved one a lot. Again this is a nice piece for them.
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Thank you for such a lovely reply to my comment about a tribute to a soldier. I am sure he would like it as he kills people for Jesus.
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Wonderful...a beautiful write for sure. Thank you for sharing!
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Beautiful
thoughts. Songs of praises should be sung continiously for our men and women in uniform. Thanks for sharing Good Luck in the Contest
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Great poem with stong words!! thanks for your entry!
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You've got to be satirising all this. It's hilarious, while what you say is so painfully true in the thoughts of a lot of Americans. You say it in a way that I can't.
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No I am serious here. How could praising God and the good old USA be satire? If I had been praising the commie liberals who mock Jesus and the flag, THAT would be satire.
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