Drinking and smoking
Sleeping and yelling
Hitting and lying
Thats what happens day in and day out
I am tired of it
I just wanna die
Nobody cares
Why am I even here?
Told one thing than another
Its all lies
But I cant help to hope
That things will get better
Because I love my daddy and he says so
But if she's in the picture then it wont
So I just sit here
Killing my soul and body
Breathing but not living
Feelings but not knowing
Can't I just die?
I have nothing going for me here.
Can't I just die?
Please tell me what you think
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nice job girl good poem
NO Way u cant just die i love you and i would miss you to much and dont pay anny attion to that B***H dont let her get to u ok -
Please don't let this beat you. I know it must be hard to face the day but you have to try to live your life and continue writing such thought-provoking poems as this one. Best wishes to you.
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So sad!!!!!!!!!!!!
Things will get better, I'm sure. Don't give up. You probably have a lot more friends than you can imagine.
Death is permanent solution to a temporary problem!
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Christina I really hope you don't want to die because I will have to intervene if you do feel that way. Honestly I understand where you are coming from, hell I've seen people in the same situation and they HAVE taken their lives.
It's like a jagged piece of glass cutting into the deepest depth of my heart to hear that a friend could feel like that without me noticing. Everytime I hear, "I want to die", or something along those lines, I feel myself coming apart at the seams little by little.
I watched Matty go in the way of suicide, and Evan too, and I don't want to have to watch another friend hurt so much where they are driven to that point as well.
You have some friends who love you like a sister. If you ever need anything just talk to one of us. You're one of our friends and we love you.
Please, just don't say you hurt like this anymore. I don't want to see any of my friends hurt anymore. -
No you cant just die cuz then I would be sad this is good
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very good
acdessed thru the "newest" tab
very powerful
lies
a bummer
some seem to dwell on them
you portray hopelessness
but
also strenght
as you go on
each day worst than the next
the feeling i get is you are a survivor
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